Writing

​ In term 1 and 2 We had to choose out of two groups one was if you need some help and I think I would need some help. We would get help with plans writing if you need it. Now I know how to do plans better story I’ve done better in spelling and writing. I’ve done better in the writing of the story. In the Andy story I did well. I did a portal story I did it on a football game and I think it was good story. It was a better plan because of the writing groups it was a bit of fun. `I did one at the start of the year.

Plan: planing is good because you get a plan of what you are doing and writiing.It is good to flesh off your what it say what you are going to write down. you need 5 paragrapas 1th start the middle and the end. You need to writie down what you are going to writie about.

Edit: Editing is good because you can make it better if you wont to. You can make spelling better. You can make your story sound better.you can do lot of things to it

Here is my portal story Here is Andy story

Here is my soldier